Tearing at our weaknesses
we're pulling ourselves down
you were once so brave
though I can see your so scared now.
Would a thousand lives of love
still leave you splintered on the wall
you don't know what you want
though all you have to do is call.
When the madness stops and your alone
you'll live with your regrets
looking back on things I said
you never seemed to get.
When our friendship leaves you cold
you find your conscience almost dead
love will be the death of you
undefined by things as read.
Making up your reasons
to justify the hurt
this love has left you bare
all your senses are alert.
I'm looking out for me this time
love's not for free, you have to pay
threr are no reasons I can see
i'd ever want to stay.
This was a great poem! It tells about the kind of feelings and emotions that eberyone will eventually experience in love. Yhis poem can connect with soo many ppl, on different levels. Very well written!
ohh i liek tht line
"Would a thousand lives of love"
well spokid :)
(yes spokid is my new word and reuben thinks it is not but he knows nothing and we all know that)
hey i have déja vu
i have heard this
and yeah bye now
oh wait the rest of the poem duh
see my love is for free
so i don't agree with this poem
even with the amazing line
but i am in a freaki mood so meh
"i want you to want me
i need you to need me"
ash
p.s
"didn't i
didn't i
didn't i see you cryin'"
Much Love
Ashley
hey nikki
true love does bring painand sometimnes death but u also have to remember that u have to fight for the ones u love right?!?! no matter how much pian comes with love ur true riends will always be there so help pick up the pieces and save u from the pain. (thanks for doing that for me) but love is worth fighting for and so is the person u love...well that is what i think anyway....good all poem all around
Belinda