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Part 5:The Calm
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The Battle of Wills You dispising gaze mocks me
as you wait these seconds long
retaliations and decieving
your expectations are great for this.
Explainations far to late to come
in this silence, on this day
I could try to tell you this
but your response would be the same.
Your face doeshold an empty gaze
no emotions to show or feel
emptiness stands all around us
shallow breathing disappeares in it's depths.
Eternal shadows listen
wait for an outbreak, for more lies
for bloodstained tears to flow once more
to replenish it's thirst.
We wait for a broken silence
only to be made by us
a fragile peace to be broken
be words that must be said.
good poem.. and hope you never stop writing...because you have much ability to be a good poetess... your words give me spritually satisfaction..dont know why? but I know I have ties maybe with you since the life came into being... good junior friend resect your words and thoughts...
I appriciate this writting, because it reminds me of what happened in the fight that sparked the writing of my first series. I wonder if major fights always have a "calm" or a "tranquil" like this? Anyway, good stuff, last to stanzas ecspecialy.
ah i love the second stanza hun
"for bloodstained tears to flow once more"
i love that line, i'll tell ya why later
be words doesn't go right tho i think you mean but or somethiing like that
ash
Much Love
Ashley