The Right Choice

Did I hurt you

last time I talked to you

did i cause pain

or is this nothing new.

Did I break your heart

the way you broke mine

or did you brush it off

insist you were fine.

Did I make you see

your nothing more then just insane

or make you regret

the countless times that you played games.

Did I make the right choice

in pushing you away

my pride is much to vain

will never ask for you to stay.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

ah but it kinda sucks
well its the way itsa worded

try
"my pride is much to vain
to ask you to stay"

my draling I can't get enough of your love baby
girl i don't know i don't know i don't know why
can't get enough of your love baby
girl if i could only make you see, make you understand

k sorry i shall stop sing at the top of my lungs and critique this :P

i mean its not bad it just seems like your forced the wors out

can't get enough of your love baby

ash


Much Love

Ashley