You say you'll make it up to me
you'll fix the problems that you caused
you tell me things I want to hear
and then you wait for my applause.
You make promises that you can't keep
and you know that you won't in the end
you say you really love me
you don't even act like a friend.
You will not stand up for whats right
but you say one day you will
all I can say is don't bother
of all your shit i've had my fill.
omg! it's amazing. your writing is exactly how i feel and what i've had to face for so long. you really put into words how i feel and it is expressed with true feeling. Keep it up...always write what you feel. if everyone stopped writing what they felt, there would no longer be any emotions or feelings left in this world. There would be no words. I LOVE IT! thanks for the inspiration that i needed. and just know, you're not alone out there on this one.
Jenica
I know I've read this before. I know I have. I know it. Hmm.. why didn't I say something? In any case, this is truly a good poem.
i feel the exact same way.....great poem
I don't like the very end but the rest is great
thats just what i am feelin right now hunni
ash
Much Love
Ashley