Author Information
Yet Another List-Part One
Welcome Guys! This is the first of many editions.This is the poem where I talk about all the people I don't like and my ex guys and "flings" and then I talk about how much they suck.As you can tell I am in a really BAD mood, so any Ex's that read this please don't be offended.
Guy number one
his name was Scott
the first love of my life
but he taught me
one special thing
to stab those you love with knives.
(for those of you who don't know the story, this guy is a HUGE asshole and I would personally like to see him impaled.)
anyway...
Guy number two
his name was Joel
I really should have known
he was an ass
a selfish jerk
now will always be alone.
(You see, Joel knew for a long time I liked him and held it over my head, and teased me about it.He should burn)
onward...
Guy number three
was my Ruby
a best friend who caused me pain
loved my friend
from start to end
drove me purely insane.
(I still consider him one of my best friends so I forgive, love ya hon.)
yet more...
Guy number four
"Brandon James"
a rebound through and through
I let him go
for his best friend
something i'll never again do.
(B.j was alright but he has to go in the list...oh well.)
Guy number five
lets not go there
we all know who he be
I do not hate
I am just mad
at him as well as me.
(Hart was ok but yeah, not mad any more.)
See and these people, only a select few of the many, are the least bad. This concludes this edition of Yet Another list.
bye.
ps:Guys are asses!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought I'd writtena critique a long time ago.. maybe I did and missed it. I bet I did. Anyway, I've always enjoyed this line:
but he taught me
one special thing
to stab those you love with knives.
Yes, yes, I do like that line.. I do..
hehe oh my
its quetionable tho, i mean if a ruby in the ruff, unpolished and uncut, is better then one that's been molded by someone, (and i am also sorry:( i wish he had loved you not me)
and scott wasn't so bad...he could have been jeff :)
and yes joel should burn
ah yes poor B J :( hugs to ya hun (no nikki not you :P BJ)
and as for guy number five! he is an ass for playing with hearts, so shame to him (sorry hart but its true, good friend bad boyfriend)
ash
Much Love
Ashley
Revenge is dish best severed cold and i think i got frost bite off this one
well at least i wasn't mad out to be an asshole in this one.Thanks for the little bit of an ego boost
Love Ya
Brandon James
nikki
not all guys are asses they just dont see what us girls see. but i know the pain all too well...adn no worries u will find someone worthy of ur love and all that mushy stuff...good poem tho...as usual
Belinda