Thinking back to yesterday
and to all the things you said
for every lie you ever told
while all alone within my dread.
Ponder all these pointless thoughts
that seem to never really end
and when this day has finished
can I say your still my friend.
Pass by mirrors every day
can't look and can not see
I wonder if the person
that looks back will still be me.
I know the way I feel right now
just simply can't be right
I want to be myself
but it seems so hard a fight.
Please tell me what I need to do
to leave this dreary hell
just what I have to do
and tell me this will all end well.
i read this one but the critque didn't show :(
nice job
but its not your best
ash
Much Love
Ashley
The whole second stanza with the "can i still say you're my friend" in it was breathtaking. Jeesh, how many poems are left?
you will always be the same person to me no matter what
and don't worry not all guys you meet will be dicks
Love Ya
Brandon