Pointless Thoughts

Thinking back to yesterday

and to all the things you said

for every lie you ever told

while all alone within my dread.



Ponder all these pointless thoughts

that seem to never really end

and when this day has finished

can I say your still my friend.



Pass by mirrors every day

can't look and can not see

I wonder if the person

that looks back will still be me.



I know the way I feel right now

just simply can't be right

I want to be myself

but it seems so hard a fight.



Please tell me what I need to do

to leave this dreary hell

just what I have to do

and tell me this will all end well.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Bad Mood, Enough Said.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

i read this one but the critque didn't show :(

nice job

but its not your best

ash


Much Love

Ashley

Josh Glasgow's picture

The whole second stanza with the "can i still say you're my friend" in it was breathtaking. Jeesh, how many poems are left?

Brandon Ashe's picture

you will always be the same person to me no matter what
and don't worry not all guys you meet will be dicks

Love Ya
Brandon