I Love You/You Don't Love Me.

Folder: 
closet boxes 2002

He Said:



I will love you forever

something I hope you never doubt

I hope you understand this

and that you know what i'm about.

I would never try to cause you pain

for it would hurt me just as bad

to think of what i'd done to you

to make you feel so sad.

I love everything about you

from your head down to your toes

and no matter what happens

be sure that "that" you'll always know.

I love the way your eyes do shine

I love your pouty lips

I love the way you brush my cheek

with your soft fingertips.

I will always love you

no matter what you say or do

so always and forever

know that all my words are true.



She said:



You tell me that you love me

and that I should never doubt

but I can't say I understand

just what you are about.

You say you'd never cause me pain

but soon enough you will

that knife will one day reach my heart

and go in for the kill.

How can you love everything about me

or is your love all just skin deep

you do not know all about me

and into that I wouldn't leap.

I only love for what I know

but I can't just love your face

how can I say I miss you

I don't get any space.

I will not say I love you

because what you say isn't true

and even if it was

can't see me ever loving you.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Getting over it poem,
don't worry, it all be good.

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Josh Grotler's picture

I know exactly what this poem is saying. My best friend went through the exact same thing. It was pretty bad. Keep writing.

running_with_rabbits's picture

k the first part is worded amazingly and if i guy said that and meant it i would be head over heels and be sad i couldn't care :)

well
"be sure that "that" you'll always know."

that line is to much it needs work

and she was cold but i don't blame her if he doesn't know her he can't love all of her but you can feel love for someone even if you don't know them :) but still you know what i mean, and his words were worded better :P

ash


Much Love

Ashley