He Said:
I will love you forever
something I hope you never doubt
I hope you understand this
and that you know what i'm about.
I would never try to cause you pain
for it would hurt me just as bad
to think of what i'd done to you
to make you feel so sad.
I love everything about you
from your head down to your toes
and no matter what happens
be sure that "that" you'll always know.
I love the way your eyes do shine
I love your pouty lips
I love the way you brush my cheek
with your soft fingertips.
I will always love you
no matter what you say or do
so always and forever
know that all my words are true.
She said:
You tell me that you love me
and that I should never doubt
but I can't say I understand
just what you are about.
You say you'd never cause me pain
but soon enough you will
that knife will one day reach my heart
and go in for the kill.
How can you love everything about me
or is your love all just skin deep
you do not know all about me
and into that I wouldn't leap.
I only love for what I know
but I can't just love your face
how can I say I miss you
I don't get any space.
I will not say I love you
because what you say isn't true
and even if it was
can't see me ever loving you.
I know exactly what this poem is saying. My best friend went through the exact same thing. It was pretty bad. Keep writing.
k the first part is worded amazingly and if i guy said that and meant it i would be head over heels and be sad i couldn't care :)
well
"be sure that "that" you'll always know."
that line is to much it needs work
and she was cold but i don't blame her if he doesn't know her he can't love all of her but you can feel love for someone even if you don't know them :) but still you know what i mean, and his words were worded better :P
ash
Much Love
Ashley