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Our Nature
The only thing we fear is ourselves
and that's the way it should be
because the heart I see within myself
sure scares the hell out of me.
Where once we loved we only hate
and cause eachother so much pain
the pain that we cause others
is slowly driving us insane.
The petty differences divide
a once true allied force
help eachother in the end
that didn't last of course.
We are blind to all the people
who don't see things as we do
and the sad thing about all this
is this includes both me and you.
I can't really preach
I am just like all the rest
but if this was ever god's exam
we sure as hell did fail his test.
The first stanza and the last stanza made it worth while. You would have done just as well cutting out the middle, but it added some detail, I suppose. In any case, this one's up there on the good list. I'm glad you're keeping rather steady now.
haza
we suck
nice poem
and it was not to hot today! there is no such thing a perfect!
ash
Much Love
Ashley