He listens to his music
and lets the whole world drift away
only he knows what he's thinking
and I doubt he'll ever say.
His pen is writing out his note
working, desperate for his grade
but what's being lost while he does so try
his rays of youth begin to fade.
Gone are days of cheerful talks
smiles replaced by shallow grins
no longer tries to make us laugh
on a single, youthful whim.
And they all ask "What's wrong with him"
but they're too worried about their lives
none of them realize after all
that it is them that hold the knife.
So he just listens to his music
lost and alone in broken dreams
no one really see's his pain
and on nobody will he lean.
i have a friend thats like that everyone looks at him wierd and asks why he does what he does. and I think it is because of lack of friends to support him and just be there when he needs help. I try to be his friend and that is hard for me. I hope you will continue to be his friend no matter what.
angel
I can relate to this on so many levels. I used to love someone but she never went for me. So, now I just decided it isn't worth the time spent mourning over a lost soul. Very nice work. Have fun writing.
Yes, you've just described everyone on postpoems, methinks. It was good, though. I can relate as well as anybody else.
Oh, oh how this sounds like a certain person I know, I call him me.
hey sweetie nice poem i told you i would come check them out. you did a really good job
I'm that young man then. And some what now. thank you.
nikki
ilove you for writing the poem about me, hey can you get people to visit my site
love ya lots
HIValicious DOERR
:( nice poem sweetie
dust i will be ok tho
i hope
ash
Much Love
Ashley