"What's Wrong With Him."

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He listens to his music

and lets the whole world drift away

only he knows what he's thinking

and I doubt he'll ever say.



His pen is writing out his note

working, desperate for his grade

but what's being lost while he does so try

his rays of youth begin to fade.



Gone are days of cheerful talks

smiles replaced by shallow grins

no longer tries to make us laugh

on a single, youthful whim.



And they all ask "What's wrong with him"

but they're too worried about their lives

none of them realize after all

that it is them that hold the knife.



So he just listens to his music

lost and alone in broken dreams

no one really see's his pain

and on nobody will he lean.

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Racheal Godwyn's picture

i have a friend thats like that everyone looks at him wierd and asks why he does what he does. and I think it is because of lack of friends to support him and just be there when he needs help. I try to be his friend and that is hard for me. I hope you will continue to be his friend no matter what.

angel

Josh Grotler's picture

I can relate to this on so many levels. I used to love someone but she never went for me. So, now I just decided it isn't worth the time spent mourning over a lost soul. Very nice work. Have fun writing.

Josh Glasgow's picture

Yes, you've just described everyone on postpoems, methinks. It was good, though. I can relate as well as anybody else.

James Roberts's picture

Oh, oh how this sounds like a certain person I know, I call him me.

sharon's picture

hey sweetie nice poem i told you i would come check them out. you did a really good job

robertpaullocke's picture

I'm that young man then. And some what now. thank you.

Dustin Doerr's picture

nikki
ilove you for writing the poem about me, hey can you get people to visit my site
love ya lots
HIValicious DOERR

running_with_rabbits's picture

:( nice poem sweetie

dust i will be ok tho
i hope

ash


Much Love

Ashley