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once again, there's good "word rhythm" in your poetry (does that make sense?)... I think its from the fact that you are splitting sentences up into multiple lines. I see this poem in groups of four lines, actually, what do you think if you broke it up like this?:

"There are angels near
do not fear
for they can hear
your tears fall;

so just call,
doesn't matter at all
if your near or distant
they will be there in an instant,

to help you this beautiful night
to bring the light
back in your eyes,
so never forget that your guardian angel
is in your sight."