One baby is born
Wailing at the top
Of his lungs.
Another whimpers,
And coos, as if to smile
Their way here.
Self-expression thrashing,
Or gently frolicking it's way
To life, along with our very breath.
There are the first
Inklings of vocalization,
A cry into the shadows.
Within weeks,
Light arrives for some,
And figures can be seen.
Caregivers of the baby
'Read' and interpret what they think are
The baby's needs, heart, desires.
Like poetry,
Sometimes the reading
Is misinterpreted.
Sometimes the reader
Places extra lines, words, phrases
From their own unfullfilled needs, heart, desires.
And sometimes the reader
And the writer can be falsely led
To think they understand each other.
Sometimes the reader
And the writer are falsely led
To think they misunderstand each other.
Sometimes, on rare occasion,
The reader reads because they have an inner love
For the beauty of self expression.
Like the newborn baby
That wails,
Or whimpers...or coos.
It is not the wailing or the whimpering,
Or even the cooing, but the beauty
Of human expression that touches them.
And sometimes, upon occasion,
The writer writes for the sole purpose
Of self expression.
And people read into it,
And see what it is
They need to see.
We are all wailing,
Whimpering babies,
Pretending to be adults, it seems.
How will you express yourself today?
How will you be understood?
Will you be understood?
Chances are,
You will not be understood,
Or at least, not completely.
Humanity, being
Connected through the heart,
But lost in words.
Verbalization,
The longest lie that has
Ever been told.
So poets, write your poems,
Cry your wailing sagas
Of horror and grief.
Coo your flowery words
Of love and forevermore,
Undying beauty that stirs your passion.
Remember yesterday,
Dream about tomorrow,
Cry and coo to the shadows in the dark.
Thrash and dance your way
Back to the heart, and express all you have
Been wanting to express.
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On point
"Like poetry,
Sometimes the reading
Is misinterpreted.
Sometimes the reader
Places extra lines, words, phrases
From their own unfullfilled needs, heart, desires."
So on point. So succinctly defines the tenous link between writer and reader. What's lost in the transport from artist to audience? What's gained? Why bother? Love it!
Yes...or, maybe nothing is
Yes...or, maybe nothing is lost but more like the art of poetry is like a piece of soft clay, that when passed from hand to hand, is molded to fit the shape of each one's needs. Thank you for reading!♡♥♡
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
The post was indeed nice Dear Respected Madam nightlight1220
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I am sorry to hear that,
I am sorry to hear that, bishu. So has it stopped after you let Jason know?
...thank you for reading. ♥
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
i f ing love this. im in love
i f ing love this. im in love with this. I L.O.V.E THIS. WOW. AHHHHHHHH.AH.AHHH. you just made me a crazy person. I love beautiful words. thank you for the read
Thanks millyardo. I he
Thanks millyardo. I get inspired by human behavior a lot. So intriguing.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Wow. This is really deep and
Wow. This is really deep and creative. I like it alot. I read it once just by itself, and then a second time and clicked on the video so while I read I was hearing, faintly, the crying of the baby. I felt like it made the poem so much more real! It was VERY smart to put that video on this page for the poem!
GREAT JOB!
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Oh wow..i'm glad you liked
Oh wow..i'm glad you liked the video addition. See what most of us go through? Lol. Actually after I posted the video I realize it was in slow motion...haven't had a chance to change it. But it looks a lot nicer in slow motion than it would at normal speed I think. They do all that stuff really fast because they want to get the baby next to the mommy asap.
..thx for the read and comment!!
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Yea, I figured it was slowed
Yea, I figured it was slowed down, since i wouldn't think they'd let the baby get cold for long!
I liked it a lot!
No problem!
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