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I am brand new here,
I came here from the dust
That fell off a star when the heavens spoke.
You didn't hear it,
But it happened.
Please believe me,
Don't erase my worth
For a moment to push aside our hearts.
Don't you know?
I came to teach you a fairytale.
The fairytale of love,
It has so much joy and happiness in it,
But you will never see it if
You cannot learn to accept the pain too.
Don't erase me.
Embrace me.
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These lines so captivated me,
"I am brand new here,
I came here from the dust
That fell off a star when the heavens spoke."
You completely drew me into the poem! And the poem is excellent! Even more so that maintains its power when given several different readings! Bravo!!!
I'm glad the poem comes off
I'm glad the poem comes off like that. The video was so upsetting it inspired me to set things in a healthier perspective.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
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I almost always skip the video links people add (I did here) so all the power came solely from your poem! It needs no side dish! ;-)
That's just beautiful!
That's just beautiful! Delightful! I love the imagery! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks Ssmoothie. I think so
Thanks Ssmoothie. I think so too. The children are our only hope to change this world for the better.
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Thanx for posting the link of youtube Respected Brightness
Thanx for posting the link of youtube Respected Brightness.Who'll dare erase you?
©bishu
You're so welcome!
You're so welcome! Interesting, huh?
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
The Irony of Apathy
This gem is full of light and hope and joy and be happiness. Thanks, I needed the reality check (and balance). Our children will be smarter than we are. They will have to be. :) ~Lady A~