The choices ive made
The place's ive stayed
All the memories ive had will be replayed
Until i stand up, Stand up to the sky
Think back to the mistakes and wonder why
Should i be here, Should i even try
The wind will push and blow it all away
The tides have turned be that what it may
Looking into your eyes, Your eyes so grey
Take away my soul, Take a part of me
Set my desires on fire, set me free
Burning in the sky, Is this the end of me
According to your Author's Comments, you were drunk and stone when you wrote this? Personally, i think it was really good.