Reflections in the water;
I always thought mine absurd-
as it copied and mocked me
claiming us kindred and same.
Are we the same really
or are we strangers alike,
sharing faces and features
but not soul.
My life back-lit with truths half-remembered
the reflection held in the unknown's shroud-
my darkness resulting from my failure and losses
my mimic using tricks of shade and distortion.
Are we really that different
or in some moments compared,
holding past and future
with no map.
My features all changing with time and with age
Her facade inconsistant as the ripples cast lies-
the hope that I grasp due to those who could reach me
she holds only the darkness which calls from the depths.
Are we really so different
or perhaps much the same -
two sides of existence
and both real.
Are we really the same
are we so really different -
different shades of the light
and both imagined.
welcome back!
:) I freakin LOVED this till the end...the last 4 lines just bug me, they feel forced and leave me wanting more to read like jut one line to tie it together or something...the rest is so packed with emotion and so well worded that the emotion seeps into my soul and then my soul is hit with what feels like fitting into format. I feel like even taking the last four away and finding one word which sums up everything you feel and then placing it where the four lines were, that would be perfection for this piece
glad to have you back! pp is in for a treat
Much Love
Ashley