New pair of shoes

New pair of shoes..

 
That's what I feel like in your "closet" 
Im in a dark enclosed space until you walk in and brighten the room. Not with the flip of a switch but with your smile. 
Why did you want me in your closet in the first place?
I know!... You liked the way I looked so you tried me on for size. Not quite comfortable; yet you liked what you saw. But the big bonus was.. I was on clearance.  Cheap. That's what I feel like at least. 
At first I thought you wanted me in your space because you fell in love with me. Forget about cheap. 
Now I see that I'm "just here" waiting for you to come in and try me out for a while. You might feel uncomftorable with me at first but after you try me on for size a few times then you'll see that we start molding together and become very comfortable with each other. 
I would much rather be the new pair of shoes than the old pair. The old pair have no soul left. 
 
NIN
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nightlight1220's picture

I always liked the old ones

I always liked the old ones better....(I've always been a little slow)


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

NicolaN's picture

Old ones

The old pair of shoes have a very different meaning. I have those too. 

AquarianMale's picture

  If sex were a new pair of

 

If sex were a new pair of shoes, I think you would wear this man out. I enjoyed your poem, but as a “foot- note,” someone once wrote: “learning to love is akin to ascertaining how to tie shoes, and that’s why most men wear slippers.” Thank you for posting, a wonderful first poem. Smiles :-)  

 

NicolaN's picture

Wasn't about sex. But about a

Wasn't about sex. But about a married man who is "testing the waters"

 

AquarianMale's picture

Sorry, I did not say it was

Sorry, I did not say it was about sex. You misunderstood the "if" in my reply. Namaste.  

NicolaN's picture

Ahh.. Lol. Sorry about that.

Ahh.. Lol. Sorry about that. yes. If it were then you would be right on that one. :)

bishu's picture

Welcome aboard

Welcome aboard !! Welcome aboard the steamship sailing on the stormy sea- There are no souls to be seen. Only ghouls who look like souls. Its a very very cruel and uncompromising world. Smooth sailing. You will soon learn to see through the masks of people around you................... Welcome to PPoems. I am trying and trying to write well.................... I'll keep on trying. Please do read my poems specially those meant for your generation


©bishu 

 

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LOL! Liked how it sounded

LOL! Liked how it sounded like a human relationship.


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NicolaN's picture

Relationship

That's exactly what it's about. :) 

wasnt sure anyone would Notice. Thank u

Jesster's picture

I think it's kind of obvious.

I think it's kind of obvious. Or maybe my mind just understands how to read between the lines. Nice work. :) Keep writing. 


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