Labyrinth of confusion

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You're running around
playing a game
your labyrinth drives me insane.

Hint of direction here
Dash of deception there
Cannot seem to figure out where

What direction should I turn
your watching me,
you see me turn

It's kinda fun
to pick up your trail
though I'm not sure it's you
I can't tell by your tale.

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Thanks all! I really

Thanks all! I really appreciate all the comments!
Still, I find myself running around and crashing into walls. Argh! Seems I've headed into a hall full of mirrors. Harumph!


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Amazing!

Oh my goodness! This is Amazing! This is cool and beautiful. I just love it! And I LOVE the line "Hint of direction here, Dash of deception there" That's my favorite line! I love this poem, it's great!

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I just read this comment

Nowim wondering what ever happened to pinkdot. Are you still around? 


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Wonderful little verse! I

Wonderful little verse! I enjoy the hide and seeking! You scribe it delightfully well!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thanks smoothie. Hide in seek

Thanks smoothie. Hide in seek is fun. :)
Cheers!


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A Motif of Fun

This one works well, the motif is consistently woven. The chase is on! The readiness is all! (smile) - Lady A