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Labyrinth of confusion
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Observations... You're running around
playing a game
your labyrinth drives me insane.
Hint of direction here
Dash of deception there
Cannot seem to figure out where
What direction should I turn
your watching me,
you see me turn
It's kinda fun
to pick up your trail
though I'm not sure it's you
I can't tell by your tale.
Thanks all! I really
Thanks all! I really appreciate all the comments!
Still, I find myself running around and crashing into walls. Argh! Seems I've headed into a hall full of mirrors. Harumph!
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Amazing!
Oh my goodness! This is Amazing! This is cool and beautiful. I just love it! And I LOVE the line "Hint of direction here, Dash of deception there" That's my favorite line! I love this poem, it's great!
I just read this comment
Nowim wondering what ever happened to pinkdot. Are you still around?
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Wonderful little verse! I
Wonderful little verse! I enjoy the hide and seeking! You scribe it delightfully well!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks smoothie. Hide in seek
Thanks smoothie. Hide in seek is fun. :)
Cheers!
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A Motif of Fun
This one works well, the motif is consistently woven. The chase is on! The readiness is all! (smile) - Lady A