Tumultuous waves
of the sea
flowing every way
through me
Stranded are
my heart and soul
on an island far
from any lull
of Tumultuous waves
of the sea.
Dark and gray
is the sky
Clouds to hide
my corrupted mind
yet separated
from the sea
where you have found
the rest of me
in Tumultuous waves
of the sea.
Who caused all this,
you might ask?
as you travel swift
under imbreakable mast
and the gentle tide
draws you near
and for a moment every-
thing is clear
'til Tulmultuous waves
of the sea-
As i feared-
Reappear...
this is a good one too.. i like the ending best. it reminds me of old english poetry with the rhyme and setup, megan kinda nailed it with the poe comparison.
WOW this poem reminds me of edgar allen poe. and that is amazing, because i love his poems, so give yourself a huge pat on the back. and sorry for commenting on so many of your poems, i'd never read them before, except for the one about april that she had me read... and i am just very impressed with your flair for writing, haha.