precious rose

blood drips from your precious rose

the rose of a promise mad long ago

the softness of her delicate petals

the darkness of her beauty you chose

she stained your hands with her love

from the moment you tore her from the ground

and carried her into the world above.

so loyal, she wiats in her crystal case

so patient for you

fragile as ever, bleeding her color; losing her love

nourish her with your blood

for nothing as beautiful could ever take her place

chrimson petals wither away to the floor

her beauty so delicate

her beauty, no more

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It's about a guy abusing the love his lover gave him

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Love turns to hate, and peace to war, with only the slightest of disturbances. If the majority of mankind cannot help but destroy even the sweetest of things, how can it be expected to coexist with the rest of the world. A simple poem written about abused love shows our eventual and inevitable undoing.

Great poem!

- Nathaniel Jordan -