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Hidden
July 23rd, 2004
Hidden beneth the sky so blue
Are my dreams so far yet true
The worries I cry
And the soul you try to pry
Hidden within the sunset
Everything I regret
Burns deep within
Everything I wish to be forgiven
Hidden inside the clouds of white
All the dark forbidden delights
The special moments of time
That remenise so devine
Hidden in the shadows of dusk
The untimed memory of discust
And the way I feel
Hidden and yet so real
good and impressive one... yeah its a very clear and good poem with rich thought and sure ... the way you did it is great and heart knocking of course... so I can loudly say that you are a sweet poet with honey poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?