You said you would care
Now look at me
i'm so cold and bare
How could you have decieved
I am full of anger
Oh how i wish you could understand
Words you speak
All the things u said u'd do and can
No point has been proven no company u had shared
Scarred and cut
Look at my heart it has been teared
What kind of friendship is this you call
I see no affection
Nothing whatso ever at all
But as time grew us apart
the truth reveals
Promises are made to be broken...
I *heart* this poem. The emotion in it... is really obvious. Is it from experience? It sounds like you've been hurt. I like it. I can relate to it. I've read one or two of the others and I really like your style. They flow. Keep it up!!<3
Promises are made to be kept. If someone breaks it, it wasn't really a promise at all, just a lie.