*she gave me everything and i messed it up

such a sight

to see you smile,

laugh, and cry.



remember that night

you took my hand,

said "feel this,"

and wiped your tears away?



look what i've done to you:

slit your wrists

at my own house;

what is wrong?

oh baby please

don't be sad.

i love you-

you should know that.

i'll wipe away your tears;

no more crying late at night,

in my bed

when im resting right beside you.



i lay with you at night,

and think

why i did that...

why did i do that

to such a beautiful girl?

she never hurt me,

she gave me everything;

her body,

her heart,

her soul.

i took it,

messed it up

and made you cry-

broke your heart.



how could i do this?

i don't deserve to be called

a man now.

if i could take back

that one mistake

i would;

i wish i could.



through all the misery

and pain,

i'm glad you stuck with me;

i need you,

i don't know what i would do

without you;

die, most likely.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

about lauren...

this one is real, hope yall feel it.

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Hey how are you i just wanted to say i love this poem you have/had written its very sweet and heart warming and it has so much emotions in it, reminds me of some of stuff i went through.

You are a very good/talented writer keep up the good work and your poems are amazing.


~Heather Feazel~