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In A Frenzy
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Observations At AA Meetings in a frenzy . . . .
he fritters away time
like a drunken sailor
frivolity his modem
unabashed sexual innuendos
hung upon bare verses
like old broken ornaments
on a dried up christmas tree . . . .
death at his doorstep
I love the visual images you
I love the visual images you have created in this, particularly the 'broken ornaments on a dried up Christmas tree'. Sue.
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Thank You
The tragedy of a life dialed
The tragedy of a life dialed up, restless and frantic while simultaneously mired in a slow and inwardly squalid death: Wow, this cuts deep.
Skillfully depicted with heart-crushing, unforgettable metaphors and unflinching realism, this is a stellar example of a cautionary portrait. Very well done! Important and impressive work.
Thank you for your kind critique.
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