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emerged one day  

     from a coma . . . .

  looked back into the din

         reeled from the sight . . . .

hit the replay button

   nothing learned from the past . . . .

        just another day

           in delusional paradise

     

 

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last updated 8 October 2024 - 9:10pm
©5 April 2024 - 12:11pm — Stephen
11 July 2024 - 8:22pm — sweetwater
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I think this is a perfect

I think this is a perfect summing up. Sue.

11 July 2024 - 8:35pm — Stephen
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Thank You

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10 April 2024 - 4:59am — patriciajj
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The lasting impact of this

The lasting impact of this skillfully crafted flash of reality is amazing. There's so much immersive power, so many stories, in the words "delusional paradise". Painful and stunning. Excellent work.  

 

 

10 April 2024 - 8:21am — Stephen
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Thank you for your kind critique.

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