emerged one day
from a coma . . . .
looked back into the din
reeled from the sight . . . .
hit the replay button
nothing learned from the past . . . .
just another day
in delusional paradise
The lasting impact of this skillfully crafted flash of reality is amazing. There's so much immersive power, so many stories, in the words "delusional paradise". Painful and stunning. Excellent work.
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The lasting impact of this
The lasting impact of this skillfully crafted flash of reality is amazing. There's so much immersive power, so many stories, in the words "delusional paradise". Painful and stunning. Excellent work.
Thank you for your kind critique.
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