Sordid

sordid . . . 

    memories

derived from ashes

         cling to my mind

      too long replayed

   eight tracks on a loop . . .

forever 


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Thank you.

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S74RW4RD's picture

Fantastic use of metaphor!

Fantastic use of metaphor!


Starward

sweetwater's picture

I like this very much :-)

I like this very much :-) sue.

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Thank you.

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patriciajj's picture

A striking, chilling and

A striking, chilling and achingly precise description of how the past seems to relentlessly stalk us. Very impressive, high-impact word crafting. 

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Thank you for your kind critique.

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