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Sordid
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Inner Mind sordid . . .
memories
derived from ashes
cling to my mind
too long replayed
eight tracks on a loop . . .
forever
sordid . . .
memories
derived from ashes
cling to my mind
too long replayed
eight tracks on a loop . . .
forever
Thank you.
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Fantastic use of metaphor!
Fantastic use of metaphor!
J-Called
I like this very much :-)
I like this very much :-) sue.
Thank you.
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A striking, chilling and
A striking, chilling and achingly precise description of how the past seems to relentlessly stalk us. Very impressive, high-impact word crafting.
Thank you for your kind critique.
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