Appointments and schedules
Time limits overdue,
Restless and weary
No time to let loose.
Hustle and bustle
Rush and still late,
Frenzied and frantic
This can’t be our fate.
Get busy, let’s hurry
Try to keep pace,
Exhausted and tired
Impatient, can’t wait.
Try to move forward,
No time to waste;
To make progress in life
Advance and make haste.
Depleted and eager
Worn out and fatigued,
To create a better future
We learn to succeed.
With pressing agendas
And long list to-do,
Chaotic commotion
At the end of our fuse;
A spinning vortex of time;
Life is streaming by quick.
It seems just like yesterday,
that we were mere kids.
Gone by in an instant,
a sudden blink of my eye,
everything I've ever known is changing,
all I can do is wonder why.
So much stress to get something done,
but does it matter what we do?
Life flies by in an instant,
it’ll all be over soon.
Relax, slow down
Unwind and rest;
Live for each moment
And savor each breathe.
We try to accomplish so much,
Leaving no time for family or friends;
It’s a quick race to the finish
When you burn your candle from both ends.
~Deziraye Wald~
I really enjoyed this poem,
I think that the poem is very good, and it is easy to understand. The poem has rhythm, so it can not be read quickly. I really enjoyed this poem, it made me think about things that are expressed, the desire or wish that is completely out of the writers ability to change at least from her point of view...
This technique places an emphasis on those things the writer surrenders herself to, the language used to express the hectic pace of life to impact on both the writers spiritual and physical world.
Great write...
keep writing
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot