JUST IN TIME

rundown....abandoned.....falling apart

crumbling......decay

foundation cracked......weary from neglect

feeling condemned



rainbows all vanished

pot of gold .......empty

darkness.....happiness obscured

hope...obliterated



just in time ......you save me with a glance

a simply word.....mending damage

a smile.......fixing all that is broken

feeling alive!


Author's Notes/Comments: 

Muse whispered in my ear !
what a deal!

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pluguan's picture

It is in the greatest darkness
that the brightest light shines,
But lo' it is in the brightness,
That the darkness disappears.
Where does it go?

Rich.E.

A lovely work thank-you Ms Sillers.

It is with the fifth candle we can light the other four.

May you be safe and well.


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Amalia Jagd's picture

without all the .....s its an awewsome work! :)

Tim / manatee Marshall's picture

IT was me~ lol good as usual, L&P