a better sphere

when i was young

people didn't die

they just "went to a better place - a better sphere"

as i grow up

i realise people die

and any place would be better than here


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Ernest Bevans's picture

your poem is part of universal riddle:

A dream within a dream
conspiracy or scheme?
another "sphere" not here
is it really better there?

Good piece - Keep writing - Keep the faith.