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A Prayer
When you sent me down
Did you hang your hand in shame?
When you dealt me these cards
Did you not feel them pull on your heart?
When you decided the destiny of my life for me
Did you not foresee the result: (would be) misery?
Did your hands not shake?
When you wrote my fate?
beautiful
Ironically enough i just finished reading someone elses 'prayer' poem, and although his was quite different, yours was a pleasure to read nonetheless. The only thing that baffles me is that almost everyone has one of these poems, hey, i probably have one of my own. :P
I don't know how one "critiques" a stranger's work without sounding forward or pretentious. I enjoy these poems; that is all.
neat work .
great work .