People come
and people go
Life is ever changing
Relationships form
friendships anew
The world keeps turning
Somethings born
somethings die
Circle of life remains
Flowers bloom
love flourishes
Flames continue burning
Days are long
nights grow short
Time is slowly fading
Time starts to fly by
only getting faster
Everything starts aging
Babies grow up
adults move away
Life is ever changing
Thank you for the advice. I didn't think it sounded finished as well so I removed the last stanza until I can finish it. Once again thank you
i liked this until the very end. it sounded like you wanted to add more by using the last stanza. the second to last would have left a complete verse in my opinion. it's still a nice thought though.
MR