Love is pain
love cannot be contain
inner feelings of a deeper abyss
sorrow overtakes
the piece of hearts broken
my chest remains open
just a hollow shell
as my future becomes hopeless
death comes closer
noone to hold but myself
only time can tell
will i see heaven
or will i see hell
broken hearts of a broken past
i remain the last
as i grasp before i fall
deeper and deeper into the abyss
of darkness where is cold
and i become alone
laughing voices sound like echos
into my dome
since birth i was curse
onto this planet earth
no destiny can be control
nor fortold
i will be forgotten
but never told
my words remain silent
my tomb will never be brothered
remember me or remember me not
i will be just a fragmation of the past
only God knows my faith
as I take my breath
I liked this poem. Actually I don't believe I've read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you don't mind I'd appreciate it if you read a few of my works and gave me some pointers.
i agree
with this poem