Mrs. Unknown

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*1. NEW POETRY

Blood soaked hands....
Lost in unknown lands..
The air that I breathe is not of this Earth..
I was dead at birth..
Roaming this delusional planet,
I think I have finally had it. Damn it!
There is a wormhole out there waiting for me,
In the darkness and I cannot see.
But once I find it, this I know,
I'll get sucked in its twisted flow.
I'm forever doomed to be something unknown.
I never thought I could feel so alone.
No one can see me because they don't understand.
I'm lost forever with blood stained hands..

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SSmoothie's picture

very deep and i love the way

you only slightly suggest the cutting/suicide. lost from birth very strong very emotive poem and this is one of the best Ive read of yours and I love the subtle change in style it is more interpretive and less shove this down your throat. Beautiful work I respect this piece highly! Cheers SS


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MrsLivingston©'s picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)


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