If the strength inside refuses to hide
forged by the gods themselves
we'll ride into battle like lance driven cattle
and into the horrors of death we do delve.
We sway from committing, find truth remitting
sweating away lives for a dollar
bite down on lies, sever sustaining ties
wishing we were just a bit taller
for we're meant to explore, to shatter the doors
though the fireside is much more preferred
we push into the cold till our bodies are old
the pity of our lovers incurred.
I'll turn back your sword, have you gasp for your lord
run your soul through with my malice
protect sacred flesh, keep thier blood fresh
record a poem in moments of dalliance
have my efforts rebuffed, snap free of the cuffs
that keep us pidgeonholed in stasis
walk on the wrong sides of the tracks, wheather ill convcieved attacks
cuz Id rather wear velvet and laces.
For I am a male, born out of hell
supposedly the one who hoards strength
but I feel thats a lie, though I cant tell you why
for beauty I cant capture with paint.
Fuck, fuck, fuck! There goes
Fuck, fuck, fuck! There goes my superiority complex! This is fucking unreal completely fucking brilliant! My how wonderously your work has developed! Cuz you need to spread the shit out this one so many brilliant lines and perfectly executed rhyming couplets completely un pretentious. My one criticism is the word 'do' before 'delve' it messed the rhythm up for me and I'm only saying it really so you know that it's not a perfect complement and therefore more believable because that's really important to me that you really believe me because I really mean it. Awesome write bro! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
thank you so much Smooth! Im
thank you so much Smooth! Im so glad you liked, as you provide inspiratIon by your awesomeness. Love ya