loose control

seeing you for the first time was magical 

we locked eyes and I knew.... we knew 

when your hands touched my skin for the first time I knew what I wanted to do 

As the night went on, we got dangerously close.... It was intoxicating 

Time progressed and the tension increased 

I couldn't take it anymore i wanted to loose control 

I got dangerously close but this time I didn't hesitate 

I kissed those luscious lips of yours 

you took my face in your soft but strong hands and kissed me ever so softly but oh so passionately 

you helped me undress, your hands exploring my body, chills going through my body like a hurricane 

as we went to bed, I knew... you knew...

 

 

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a.griffiths57's picture

loose control

 

 

A sensual poem, you have written here. The build up and love making is well written and thoughtful. Your poem is great to read I like your poem very much. Sexy.


 

 

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thanks so much =) 

thanks so much =) 

allets's picture

Spicey Writey

"...we knew.." ouch. Nice to hear a hot  beginning that has lasting potential for a change - refreshing really - OUCH that's hot ~Lady A~


 

 

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thanks for reading!  

thanks for reading!