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If I Were To De Tonight
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Poems 2004 If I were to die tonight,
Would you blame the moon above?
Would you remember how I lied?
Saying I didn't believe in love?
If I were to die tonight,
Would you remember how I slept away the days?
Waiting for the night to come,
So you and I could play?
If I were to die tonight,
Would you remember how I hid?
Finding sanctuary in the shadows,
Never regretting anything I ever did?
If I were to die tonight,
Would you remember all my flaws?
Would you remember how I tried to fight?
Against your worthless laws?
If I were to die tonight,
Would you remember how I left?
Screaming my rage,
And you acting as though you were deaf?
If I were to die tonight,
Would you remember how I lied?
Would you remember how you turned your back?
Even when I cried.
If I were to die tonight,
Would you mourn my loss?
Or would you sit there blankly?
And wonder who I was?
ive just read 3 of your poems. i was reading your critiqued poems but i was reading this one cause i have a poem on here call if i would die or something like that. you should check it out*. anywayz i just wanted 2 write & say your poems are so very true to what ive seen life to be, you must be screwed like me j/p... in your poems i feel a lot of sadness for you. ive been there once (fuck everything, fuck everyone, the worlds full of shit, god PLEASE kill me- take my life-) but ive outgrown that in the past few months. all i had to do was change my surroundings. im not saying your a dark sad person, cause i can only write when im sad, pissed, in love or about death. welperoo im gonna go. i just wanted to say nice work. check out my poems & e-mail me back: tink