her lashes bat upon heavy eyelids
reflections of red in her lethargic eyes
tasting you,
you swarm through
scraping in my ears
the temparary satisfaction,
the everlasting unsatisfaction
draining out all of me
load up another one
one more taste
and you will see
filled me up with tears of doubt
thoughts of you so faded
now that im without
soo true and lovely idea and the plea you did here is really a wonderful and heartfelt one.. yea very impressive poem..enjoyed alot and read three time and felt like its touching my soul..my innerself..well done dear poetess and hope your heart and soul is touched by my poetry..that will be my luck>>>>>>> love your poetry..doing well and wish if you do more commens to know how its...best of luck..