I am the shadow.
I creep.
In all the places
you cant see;
I am there.
I am light enough
when the mood beckons,
yet darker than my sin allows.
I can be your loving friend
Or your hateful enemy.
No, you don't know
what I know,
you can't go
where I go.
I creep.
I am the shadow.

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Moonshadow's picture

Wow! thanks for your comments

Wow! thanks for your comments guys! I am truly honoured! :) 

Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow

allets's picture

Hey Hey

The play on your site nom de plume is appropo. It goes in a circle and stops at the beginning - nice penning ~~A~~



mrpoofs's picture

"yet darker than my sin

"yet darker than my sin allows." YESSSSSSSSSSS. Awesome stuff right hurr.

Beavis's picture

Great write!

I missed this one somehow! I love it!

cevance's picture

Nice composition.

I like the subject and the direct ominous overtone it conveys. It also has a smooth rhythm, which I always consider a plus.

SSmoothie's picture

Nice one shadow! Short but

Nice one shadow! Short but well formed I creep... I like it! Cheers SS

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Moonshadow's picture

Thanks SSmoothie!


Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow