I am the shadow.
I creep.
In all the places
you cant see;
I am there.
I am light enough
when the mood beckons,
yet darker than my sin allows.
I can be your loving friend
Or your hateful enemy.
No, you don't know
what I know,
you can't go
where I go.
I creep.
I am the shadow.
Wow! thanks for your comments
Wow! thanks for your comments guys! I am truly honoured! :)
Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow
Hey Hey
The play on your site nom de plume is appropo. It goes in a circle and stops at the beginning - nice penning ~~A~~
"yet darker than my sin
"yet darker than my sin allows." YESSSSSSSSSSS. Awesome stuff right hurr.
Great write!
I missed this one somehow! I love it!
Nice composition.
I like the subject and the direct ominous overtone it conveys. It also has a smooth rhythm, which I always consider a plus.
Nice one shadow! Short but
Nice one shadow! Short but well formed I creep... I like it! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks SSmoothie!
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Dont look for me, I'll find you ~Moonshadow