He gave me bones,
He forgot they could break.
He gave me a heart
But it always aches
Love,
But it was fake.
He gave me hope,
Yet there’s so much I could take.
He gave me emotions,
But those too I can shake.
I am not sure,
What did he make?
Up until now I still see a mistake.
Keep Writing!
A wise person once said this to me:
Don’t be dragged down
Let your thoughts dwindle. Let your fears ease. the wind will cure you
the world it self will rotate just for you.
Be at ease, for even a moment. just lay
let yourself rest. and be at peace.
I think it's the best advice to give :-)
Your poem is so lovely and so full of emotion! Keep writing :-)
"Although beauty may be in the eye of the beholder, the feeling of being beautiful exists solely in the mind of the beheld." ~Martha Beck