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Welcome to My Life No one will blame me anymore.
I don't have to worry about men.
Finally, I learned to walk out the door.
I'll keep going on until the end.
Life is beautiful if you love yourself.
It took me this long to understand that.
Will I ever be able to completely love myself?
Maybe soon I'll stop calling myself fat.
How long has it been since I've been single?
Now that I can explore it,
I have so many men that want to mingle.
My happiness is finally lit.
I feel like I've grown wings.
All of the burden has been lifted.
I don't have to lie about things
because I'm free instead.
Honesty will never fear
Honesty will never fear investigation. It is not so much the lack of candor in words that we speak, but the deception that plagues the soul. You should never put yourself in the presence of someone - male or female, who makes you feel that you are not worth the truth. That being said, I did feel the struggles and heartfelt emotions emulating from your poem. I think personally you should continue to work on your poetic technique to make it a bit more succinct. Perhaps your feelings will then echo a bit louder, and with heightened clarity, via better images and more stylistic creativity. However, as is I still enjoyed the feminine quality of the sentimental ride. Thank you.
Thank you :)
Thank you :)
Great Ending
"...I don't have to lie about things/because I'm free..."
Thanks :) The thing that
Thanks :)
The thing that sucked when I was dating my old boyfriend was that even though I'm not truly guilty of doing something bad, I still had to lie about things so that I could either get away or just escape his unreasonable rage.