promises

Promise me a family

With eternal happiness

Promise me we'll live

In euphoric bliss

 

Promise me success

In my family

Promise we'll be harmonious

Like a melody

 

Promise you wont give up on me

When things get to be tough

Promise me in 50 years

That you will not give up

 

Promise me sanity

In this crazy world

Promise you'll fall deeper

As our life unfurls

 

Promise that you'll help me

When alone, I am too weak

Promise me I'll be desired

As of now I'm just a freak


Promise me children

And to be my friend

Promise to be here for me

Until the very end

 

Promise that when I die

I will rest in peace

Promise there will be happiness

And the laughter will increase


Promise me for a fact

That our love will grow

OR

Promise me an honesty

And tell me you don't know

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a.griffiths57's picture

Promises

 

 

The poem rhyms very well, but is full of uncertainty for the future. But the poem has hope for the couple and admires all things many people take for granted. I loved the poem.


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57