Tonight I lay here, with great dismay;
For when I wake, it shall be gray.
Another day, I must face;
Here where I feel misplaced.
The look in your eyes, I must say;
Is what kept me, from going away.
Breathless once more I will become;
When you and I come undone.
Oh, I wish I could tell;
How hard my heart fell.
When you just looked away,
As if ashamed of what we had to say.
I wish our eyes would once again meet;
In a place for us to keep.
And in that place we would hide;
Leaving all the lies behind.
With our new lives we would see;
What happiness in two might be.
If only dreams could come true;
It would always be me and you.
However; love is non-existant;
In this place so distant.
Away from me you are,
Oh, I wish you weren't so far.
Reality struck, nothing can be held;
In this place that just might be hell.
Nothing to love, nothing to hold;
In this world so ridiculously cold.
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This is very good, I'm also sorta new and I would love if you commented on mine. This is a really good poem for your first and I hope you write some more