remember to forget

The Grayish gloom that resides in the day after the rainy one,

 that is my story.

 Freedom is a curse.

 I lay at the bottom of your deep blues,

 yet im breathing fine.

 Its the feeling of forgetting something,

 and being at the pinicle of remembering.

 Its a trick to breathing under water,

 the danger constant.

 The shadow always standing there in the corner of my eye,

 making me remember  to forget. 

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PeterChristopherRaymond's picture

I love the moody and

I love the moody and evocative imagery. :)

Imprinted-soul's picture

I like this. Especially

I like this. Especially "freedom is a curse"

once you see through the illusion, you cannot

turn back. You can be free and alone, in a search for

more truth. Or blind and used like cattle in a paddock. 

Neither sound very appealing-