No Bull Say The Young Lady

She says im an ass hole,

and doesnt change her opinoin.

Not even in the hour and twenty five minutes

that weve been talking.

Though the tone has softend

her words still hold a harshness.

Even though im polite as my granny wants me to be.

I am stunned at the fact

that some can see with such clairity,

even in the dark.

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This one is good. I like it a

This one is good. I like it a lot. :-)

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

nightlight1220's picture

Yup should put it in a poem

You should put it in a poem format. Well, no...you should do what you want...lol...but I would have. I think it's really good.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "