You have compressed a lot of emotion and wisdom into such a few lines---always a sign of classic talent. The poem reminds me of Saint Paul's words that we are God's poetry; and John Milton's variation on it---that the person who would write great poetry must be a living poem. You stated it, from a different perspective, as wel as Milton did, and I applaud this poem!
You have compressed a lot of
You have compressed a lot of emotion and wisdom into such a few lines---always a sign of classic talent. The poem reminds me of Saint Paul's words that we are God's poetry; and John Milton's variation on it---that the person who would write great poetry must be a living poem. You stated it, from a different perspective, as wel as Milton did, and I applaud this poem!
Starward
Pencil Shavings
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Art as pencil
shavings and graphite
in a neat pile
waiting for a strong
wind.
:D
I love that!
I love that!