Poetry: Reaching Nova

I gather at the tip of my pen.

I'm Ready to give all of me.

Through these words I'm forever.

 

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Januarian's picture

You have compressed a lot of

You have compressed a lot of emotion and wisdom into such a few lines---always a sign of classic talent.  The poem reminds me of Saint Paul's words that we are God's poetry; and John Milton's variation on it---that the person who would write great poetry must be a living poem.  You stated it, from a different perspective, as wel as Milton did, and I applaud this poem!


Januarian

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allets's picture

Pencil Shavings

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Art as pencil

shavings and graphite

in a neat pile

waiting for a strong

wind.

:D

 

 



Onyamaichi

 

millyardo's picture

I love that!

I love that!