If you Don't Start It With Your Foot Is It Still
A Motorcycle
Or
Thoughts Of A Hot Summer's Night
Lying in bed on a summer night
In the Ohio River valley, trying to sleep
As beads of sweat gather and flow
From your chin and pool in the hallow
Of your neck is impossible.
The windless humid night seeps in
The open window and pulls the will to sleep
From your body. The yellow moon floats
On the haze that clings to every building
Not wanting to escape. Air Conditioning
Is for those whose cars are current
And motorcycles start with a key.
Far off in the depth of this awful night
You hear the distinctive low throat sound
Of the machine that was kick started
And for the briefest of moments
You feel its wind evaporate
The moisture from your skin.
You know the driver is aware
That sleep is hard to find.
As its rumblings fade you climb
Through the window to sit
On the small roof above the back porch.
Clad in BVDs you light the cigarette
You took from dad's unguarded pack.
You're now the cat on this hot roof
Thinking somewhere there must be a god
To chase this oppressive night away
Or perhaps the same god
Is punishing you for being poor
And not knowing it.
THIS IS WONDERFUL!! I think you write at your best when you write from memories or from deep emotions. I too remember the feeling of being raised poor in an affluent community. The best part of it all is finally accomplishing despite the slow start. YOU, my friend, are a gifted writer and this piece is wonderful.
Thanks,
Jessica
I love this glimpse into the past....makes me think of being a kid again myself...and all the thoughts and feeling on a hot summer night! Wonderful language in this....I love it...thank you for sharing this moment in time with us.