My String Theory

Within your heart I found two strings
Entrenched, entangled into your being
As I followed the eccentric weave 
Realizing what has not been seen
A memory from here or there
A dream, a hope you didn't share
A forgotten promise, a missed encounter
"What could this be?" this force around her
I traced them slowly, one by one
Starving for knowledge, I followed the crumbs
The closer I looked, slowly... more strings appeared
"I'm in over my head, what I might find... I fear!"
Decades have passed I'm still within 
Searching for where the strings begin
My time has ended and the twilight fades
The spirit appears ensuring my debt is paid 
As my companion silently escorts me 
through the stars and suns, past infinity
I felt a tug within my soul 
Your strings of love had never let go...

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9inety's picture

An undisputable beautiful

dyad of hope, showing the traditionally held view that there are higher levels of love’s full richness out there somewhere. Something I find simply lacking in contemporary literature. You have written a timeless piece of art here, free from the obsolete pain of the daily grind we can all learn a lesson in humility and humanity from you...

Stay safe
Be Happy
Peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

SSmoothie's picture

BRAVO! this is GOLD!

I loved it so much! thankyou it was beautifully written I have some simlar works this blows them away! Congrats SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Mica1127's picture

thank you

You are very kind and I truely appreciate the compliment!