Miming

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She ached for him
to speak to her
with his hands.

He traced lust on her lips
then spreading
her screaming thighs.

And when his fingers
explored her depths,
she lost her voice.

Her whole body shook
and her face expressed
what language could not.

Her eyes widened
and her mouth trembled
as silence washed over her.

Rewrite 2012

She ached for him
to speak to her
with his hands.

He traced lust on her lips
then spread
her screaming thighs.

And when his fingers
explored her depths,
she lost her voice.

Her whole body shook,
and her face expressed
what language could not.

Her eyes widened,
and her mouth trembled
as silence washed over her.

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