Closed Doors

Close friends 

become closed doors

shut in my face.

 

Slammed doors 

look like rejection

and feel like dissolution.

 

The whole world can't be wrong;

there must be reason why

everybody abandons me.

 

I'm easy to fall in love with,

easy to become friends with,

even easier to forget.

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The Sound of a Door Becoming a Wound

“Slammed doors look like rejection / and feel like dissolution.”

 

This couplet for me deepens the metaphor:

 

• a slammed door is a gesture of rejection  

• but the feeling is dissolution—something breaking down, disintegrating  

 

The piece isn’t just about losing people; it’s about losing a sense of self each time it happens.