Covered in sheets,
the rust golden Valkyries coming out as nomads
riving without lips
divorcing the ravaged branch
wayward,
to tango on your shrouds
glow worms
frost dust tread
memories have achieved their affairs
vibrancy saved like a childhood
that can’t go on but cherishes sadness
the best unsaid, mad
and deprived.
We had a change of wind so strong
to open on the breast,
wrinkled twins on a coat
of their former shade, jealous.
2
you young
poet are very, very talented,
I could learn a few things from you...
Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Thanks very much,just happy
Thanks very much,just happy to have someone read then. My book should be ready by month (putting it out through Lulu.com) so chech that out.
Melz~
MT
I have to say, I really like
I have to say, I really like your style of writing. I'm glad you joined PostPoems. I'll be looking forward to more posts from you!
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Thanks a bunch Tyler ,didnt
Thanks a bunch Tyler ,didnt know if anyone would actually read these. I'm premoting my upcoming book. Please like me on facebook for more info!
MT