5 minute lovers

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mellow

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Last seen: 5 years 17 weeks ago

Joined: 2001/01/29

heavy silence
sliced in beats
violence
has raped my needs

don't denie
the path u chose
fake and fly

my draining rose

do i know
if it is real
the better show
the bigger deal

hope is lost
i watch ur face
at any cost
at any place

i don't ask
& i dont care
it's not my task
your kind's so rare

gimme just
those 5 more minutes
i fall in trust
beneath my limits

Author's Notes/Comments:

written on a travel to kos for a rather unlucky love that would last for like 3/4 of a year.
2001-07-06 20:05:14

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17 April 2003 - 2:12am — starlite_angel

I really like this. "i don't ask & i dont care it's not my task your kind's so rare" I have to say that is my favorite line. Nice job.

1 September 2002 - 2:39pm — David Elderton (not verified)

Reading your work, I felt you captured the feeling and emotion in "5 Minute Lovers". Excellent :)

8 July 2001 - 1:05am — Marianne Chrisos (not verified)

Hey, I really liked this. I think it's really unique and nicely written.