The green grass blows,
while the blue sky shines.
The lively waters crash,
while along float the brine.
The sun high in the sky,
the clouds float along.
I wander on earth until,
one day I'm gone.
My heart hums a lonley tune,
for it hears a sad song.
As alone by myself I go,
until I go.
Along I stumble across the grass,
I march across the sandy shore.
Through the water I wade,
alone I walk,I go some more.
I hum my sad tune,
as I walk along alone.
No one hears as before,
A lost soul, disgarded, thrown.
My words no longer heard,
they are all lost to the wind.
They fly through the air,
like hair that is not pinned.
My weeping tears,
turn to mist.
For long ago,
was my last kiss.
My boy is long dead and gone,
and I have followed him.
My unpeaceful soul,
and that unfaithful Kim.
It's no use now,
in hate since I'm gone.
So for now and ever,
alone I go an walk along.
well, i figured since i typed half of this that i had to write a critique! great work here! i'm looooooooooooooving it! ;op